Wrote two Omnilux landing pages: a B2B pitch to clinicians, and the launch page for Omnilux Men.
Omnilux builds award-winning LED light therapy devices for both medical and aesthetic practitioners.
The objective: turn the practices that use these devices in office into resellers of the at-home line.
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For men with no skincare routine, I opened on one step and the complaints they already have, razor burn first. Omnilux later ran that line nearly word for word in an ad.
What I wrote and why.
The page sells clinics a new service to offer. The device is the means.
This section leans on institutional credibility: four university medical centers a clinician already trusts.
The headline sells revenue to the provider, then results to their clients. Bullets aim at the practice’s bottom line.
Microneedling, IPL, lasers, fillers, Botox, topicals: I named the treatments a clinic already sells and positioned the mask as an add-on to each.
Clinics take a working esthetician’s word over a manufacturer’s, so the proof here is a peer on video.
The paragraph under it names the specific conditions she treats, so a provider can match it against their own client list.
The close is an application, not a checkout.
What I wrote and why.
I opened on one step because these men don’t keep a skincare routine.
I chose “engineered” because it makes a skincare mask read as serious, practical technology.
This paragraph lists the complaints men already have, starting with the one their razor causes.
“Thicker skin” gives a man a reason this mask is his, and the wavelength spec ties it to the hardware.
The close answers time, the objection most likely to stop a first-time buyer: results in 10 minutes.